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In the beginning of her essay, Tamar Derby begins her essay by stating why she thinks that Applebaum's argument was not effective. She talks about how Applebaum did not use a fair-minded ethos in order to convince her readers. If she wanted to be more effective she should have used someone who is an expert in the field of Nuclear Power to explain how much Nuclear Power really costs. Another mistake that Applebaum made was failing to support her arguments which could have been more convincing if she had supported them. In my opinion Tamar Derby is right and Applebaum's  essay could have used more support for her arguments.